Short story for anyone who's interested

[Hucota7]

We really need a 'Creativity' subforum or something.

I don't think it's all that great, but it made my mom cry, so that counts for something I guess.
[Violate me with your mouse]

(for those of you who are going to say herp-derp plagiarism, Charles Allen is my pen name)

 

[Spetzer]

Quite a well written story you got here. I like it! Although if I was in that guys situation I would push Emma out of the way and save myself.

 

[Mr-McBaggens]

Quite a well written story you got here. I like it! Although if I was in that guys situation I would push Emma out of the way and save myself.

Sames haha

 

[Hucota7]

Yeah, love makes you do some stupid stuff.

 

[Roflcopter42rar]

hmmm depends on if emmas a bitch. if so goodbye emma im leaving

 

[Bernie M]

I liked it. Almost as good as watermelons.

 

[Spetzer]

I think when Bernie says something is almost as good as watermelons, its like the equivalent of getting a noble peace prize.

 

[Hucota7]

I had the same thought. Thanks Bernie. <3 Thanks everyone who has commented and read, I appreciate it.

 

[Jay]

Very well written Hucota. I enjoyed reading it.

 

[Hucota7]

Thank ya Jay. c: